Term1: Values Honesty

Writing term 1 poetry

WALT: Use personification and metaphors to create pictures for our readers. 

Personification is whe you talk or write about an object as if it was a person.

Metaphor is when you say an object is something it is not and then you tell us why you think it is like that.

Something I did well was to make it really interesting.

Something I need to work on is to make it funny.

Term 1 Handwriting

Practicing on my iPad with a stylus.

Handwriting in my book.

Something I can do well is linking.

Something I am working on is improving my speed-sometimes l write too quickly 

Writing term 1 : Recount.

WALT: Use a variety of sentence lengths and types to make my writing more interesting.

WALT 2: Use punctuation correctly at the beginning and end of sentences.

I need to make my story's more interesting by adding more detail to my sentences.

I think I did well with my punctuation.